Being forced into sitting with people as they watch is actually a good process. I am more focused on what is being looked and why.
Ben P just popped in and ended up having to watch the very first skeleton version of the documentary. His comments:
Small pictures ok on this screen but no good for TV
Good interviewees with lots to say and articulate - but also used to being speakers. Is it meant to be talking heads or a more visual film.
Worry about the timing, if you never get it finished then it will no longer be relevant or timely.
Consider introducing characters more, they go straight into the story.
Good to see people in situation.. noting issue of illness and disability.
Consider what happened in popular - maybe slogan?
Can't see relevance of the past into the present except round the room.
Most of the above is in consideration. The version he saw was the first very basic one. I need to get rid of the cutaways off the timeline to then get just the film. So I can export it tonight and have it to watch here and at home before tomorrow. And work out what I wanted to present.
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